Blackout Day

January 18, 2012

When rumors started flying around the internet that companies like Google and Facebook were considering a coordinated blackout to protest SOPA and PIPA, I eagerly hoped for a complete takedown of the sites. That hasn’t happened to nearly the degree I wanted, and I fear it won’t be enough to make the point. However, some sites are going pretty far. The English Wikipedia site, while not down, is throwing a black anti-SOPA message up to obscure every page as soon as it loads. (Non-English versions have a black banner at the top of every page urging readers to consider the devastating effects of SOPA/PIPA, too.) If you visit the homepage of WordPress.com, every “hot blog post” has been replaced with a link to an anti-SOPA page.

I wrote a letter to my representatives about SOPA/PIPA last month and published it here on my blog for everyone to see. I’ve been following the issue since October, though I’ve been busy with life and haven’t commented on it much except to share articles I’ve read about it on Facebook and Twitter. I didn’t think to save the links to those articles for later. However, I’d like to take a moment, on this day that many companies have staged protests against the SOPA and PIPA bills, to share with you some of the better articles I’ve seen in the past couple of days.

I’d like to start with Gizmodo’s explanation of SOPA (and PIPA) and the potential fallout of the bill. It succinctly explains what the bill is, how that will affect businesses big and small (including how it will enable big companies to stifle smaller competitors), and how that, in turn, will affect the average internet user. If you’re not familiar with more than the name, this is a good starting point for understanding why big internet players such as Facebook, Google, and Yahoo! are against the bill… as well as organizations such as the American Civil Liberties Union.

Furthermore, Global Voices Online, an organization which devotes itself to spreading citizens media across linguistic boundaries, has a lot to say about how the effects of SOPA/PIPA would reverberate around the world. Authoritarian regimes use methods like those required or encouraged by the SOPA/PIPA bills to censor the free circulation of ideas, and if the USA starts doing it they can point to us and claim to have been justified.

Many of the people responsible for the rise and development of the internet have spoken out against SOPA and PIPA in an open letter to congress. These include people who wrote the code that powers it and designed the technology that have made it faster and more useful.

Many petitions have been signed and today many sites have “gone dark” to one degree or another, but not everyone expects this to be an effective tactic in the long run. In response to a popular article titled Dear Congress: It’s No Longer OK To Not Know How The Internet Works, a web site called The Information Diet posted one titled Dear Internet: It’s No Longer OK to Not Know How Congress Works. The infographic it links to is currently unavailable because it’s hosted on a site that did a full-on anti-SOPA blackout, but I can’t wait to read it because the article makes good points about how congressional representatives get their information. The author encourages us to learn more about how the system works and then take the slow and steady steps to change it so that the voices of the people can be heard over the lobbyists.

It seems, however, that 13 senators have announced opposition to PIPA as a result of the internet blackouts. While undoubtedly a short-term effect (the lobbyists won’t stop just because they have been foiled this time), it’s comforting to know that it hasn’t all been for nothing. How much more effective would it have been, though, if big names like Google and Facebook really HAD gone offline in protest?

I come into this late today. I’m 14 hours ahead of the east coast of the USA right now and was especially tired last night because it followed my first day back at the elementary school, playing with the balls of energy we call 7 year olds, so I slept through most of the SOPA/PIPA protesting. (Much to my sorrow.) But I don’t think that matters too much. Because this isn’t over.

Edit (about 6 hours later): This video does a very good job of describing the intent and flaws in SOPA/PIPA using diagrams and layman’s terms.


Tangled, Part 1

December 25, 2011

I didn’t get around to watching Disney’s Tangled until a few days ago. Though I missed it in theaters, it came up in a Facebook discussion about Pixar’s upcoming Brave. Reminded of it, I got my hands on it and watched it.

Watching the movie, I found myself conflicted. The parts I liked I really liked. The parts I didn’t like, I really didn’t like. There was very little in between. At the end of the movie I simply felt disappointed. So much was done well, but the parts that were done poorly left me with no desire to watch the movie again. Frustration prompted me to write a long consideration of its pros and cons. So long, in fact, that I’m breaking it up into multiple posts. (Hopefully the others will be shorter than this one.)

That said, I would like to point out up front that I do think the movie is worth watching.

The Tale

Traditionally, the story of Rapunzel starts with a pregnant, common-born woman having cravings for her neighbor’s vegetables. When the neighbor catches her husband sneaking into her garden to steal some for a third time, the neighbor demands the unborn child as payment for the stolen vegetables. Since this neighbor is supposedly a witch, the couple complies out of fear. The girl grows up to be beautiful and eventually the witch locks her in a tower, where she stays until a prince hears her singing and starts to court her when the witch isn’t around. When the witch finds out, she cuts off Rapunzel’s long hair, which is the only way into the tower, and casts her out. When next the prince comes by, the witch blinds him. Though there are several variations on the ending, typically Rapunzel and the prince eventually get lucky and find each other again.

Tangled sets itself up with a modified origin story, adding a magic element to Rapunzel herself and setting up for a very different tale. I won’t summarize the whole movie (though there are spoilers ahead), but for my purposes here I do need to tell you about the five-minute back story with which the movie begins:

The sun sends a drop of sunlight down to the world. When it reaches the earth it grows into a flower with magical healing properties. The woman who discovers it also discovers that if she sings to the flower it will restore her youth. She selfishly keeps the flower hidden and hoards its power for herself, using it to stay young for hundreds of years. Well, when the local queen comes down horribly sick while pregnant, the king orders his men to search for the flower. They find it, uproot it, and take it back to the king, who dissolves it in water and gives the resulting broth to his queen to save her. When their daughter, Rapunzel, is born, she has golden hair — obviously the flower has had an effect on the baby, for the king and queen are both dark brunettes. The old woman who had previously been keeping the flower for herself sneaks into the palace at night, sings to the baby girl to see if she still has the same power the flower did, and finds that the flower’s powers now reside in the girl’s golden hair. Cutting off a lock of the hair to take away with her doesn’t work… the magic fades not just from the lock she now holds in her hand, but all the way to the roots of the cut hair. So she steals the child, puts her in a tower, pretends to be her mother, and teaches Rapunzel that she must stay hidden in the tower because the outside world is dangerous. Everyone is greedy and selfish, the old woman claims, and would try to hurt Rapunzel because of her magical hair.

This effectively makes it the best five-minute back story intro going into a movie that I’ve seen since I watched Up. (It doesn’t come close to being as good as the first five minutes of Up, mind you, but it still means something to be second-best when the best is so far above everything else.) The traditional fairy tale was tweaked in a way that left the core elements of the story intact while still leaving the filmmakers room to maneuver. In some ways, the core elements were strengthened, even; Rapunzel’s hair can’t be cut or its magic will be lost. The old woman who stole Rapunzel has a believable and visible motivation which drives her actions throughout the entire movie. Yet by turning Rapunzel into a stolen princess, they also establish a goal that must draw her from the tower eventually. A little cliché, perhaps, but not out-of-place for the genre and the intended audience. Nor out of character for a company so famous for its princess characters. My hopes were high.

Then the first song played and I knew in the tiniest corner of my small intestines that the movie would not live up to the intro.

The Music

I’m starting with the music because that was the first thing to set off klaxons in the critical half of my brain. I will be discussing the songs and how they serve to enhance the story — or fail to.

Let me first explain what I mean about a song enhancing the story. The songs in a musical should serve as emotional exclamation points, of a sort; a character in a scene talks until his or her emotions thicken so much that the character can only truly express him or herself in song. A song can be used to establish a character or setting, too, early in the movie or play. It doesn’t really matter who sings the songs as long as they further the story. However, it is typical for the main character to be involved in most if not all of the songs in a musical. In general, if a song does not serve the exposition of the story then it should not be included.

Now, before getting into the first song’s part in telling the story, I just want to say that I dislike it. It’s a pop song, which is a little out if place for the genre, but I have no problem with that. I like A Knight’s Tale, which is nothing but a generic fantasy love story set to pop music. I adore Ladyhawke, which is a much-less-generic fantasy love story with an 80s rock soundtrack. So I don’t believe the genre disjunction is the cause of its failure to satisfy. I do have a basic aesthetic problem with the song, in that it is a soulless, empty, generic pop song that sounds like it belongs in High School Musical. While that must surely have an effect on my lack of respect for it, I tried to acknowledge that while watching the movie and  pay more attention to lyrical content than music genre.

The song, titled “When Will My Life Begin”, is the first thing we see in the movie after the five-minute intro. As the first song in the movie and the first song sung by the main character, it should establish her situation and personality. In a sense it successfully fulfills that purpose. We as an audience are introduced to Rapunzel’s average day and the initial source of conflict to be resolved: even taking advantage of all the amusements available to her — and boy, does she make good use of that tower — she feels like there should be more to life. Yet I question how well the song establishes Rapunzel’s personality.

Let’s first consider the effectiveness of comparable songs from other Disney films. In Beauty and the Beast, “Belle” clearly shows the audience what life is like in Belle’s town and what she thinks of it. Belle’s opinions and the way she expresses them give you an insight into how she thinks. Furthermore, Belle spends chunks of the song with her nose buried in a book while you find out what the townsfolk think of her. Gaston is also established as an annoying antagonist right off the bat. By the end of the song, tension has built and Belle passionately proclaims her desire to get the hell out of that town. Aladdin’s establishing song, “One Jump Ahead”, both is and isn’t quite as multi-talented as “Belle”. Someone listening to “Belle” by itself is still likely catch most of the nuances that he or she would get from watching it with the animation. “One Jump Ahead” relies far more heavily on the support of the animation to get a similar wealth of information across. Both songs impart a great deal of information about the main character in only a few minutes using a combination of song and visuals.

Going back to Tangled, the first song does a pretty good job of establishing Rapunzel’s environment and everyday life, especially considering that the movie starts from a disadvantaged position. How much can you do with a girl living in a tower removed from the rest of society? In terms of animation they did quite a bit; Rapunzel bustles about like mad in her quest not to get too bored. And we do get to see her alternately swinging around by her hair and using it to grab things from a distance like Indiana Jones does with that whip of his. We learn that she has many talents, too, honed by lots of practice with few distractions. But this song and its accompanying animation leaves some questions unanswered.

For instance, how often does her “mother”, the selfish old woman, come by? The animation that accompanies “When Will My Life Begin” implies that Rapunzel spends most of her time alone with her chameleon friend. We see near the end of the song that the old woman slept in the tower when Rapunzel was younger, but there is nothing to indicate whether or not that is still true. She clearly doesn’t spend all day, every day at the tower. When Rapunzel asks the old woman to get her some shells for her birthday, the old woman complains that it would keep her away from Rapunzel for three days as if that were a very long time. How often Rapunzel is alone should be relatively clear by the end of the establishing song and backed up by later events, but the audience receives mixed signals for the first quarter of the film. Since humans are social animals, the old woman’s frequency of visitation should be considered an important part of Rapunzel’s character development and established early.

Then there’s the matter of Rapunzel’s personality. Let’s examine the song’s lyrics by themselves:

And so I’ll read a book
Or maybe two or three
I’ll add a few new paintings to my gallery
I’ll play guitar and knit
And cook and basically
Just wonder when will my life begin?

Then after lunch it’s puzzles and darts and baking
Paper mache, a bit of ballet and chess
Pottery and ventriloquy, candle making
Then I’ll stretch, maybe sketch, take a climb,
Sew a dress!

And I’ll reread the books
If I have time to spare
I’ll paint the walls some more,
I’m sure there’s room somewhere.
And then I’ll brush and brush,
and brush and brush my hair
Stuck in the same place I’ve always been.

And I’ll keep wonderin’ and wonderin’
And wonderin’ and wonderin’
When will my life begin?

And tomorrow night,
Lights will appear
Just like they do on my birthday each year.
What is it like
Out there where they glow?
Now that I’m older,
Mother might just
Let me go

The picture these lyrics paint in my mind is that of a girl with the internal motivation to keep herself occupied 24/7 but who somehow lacks any kind of ambition. She has a seemingly vague desire, mentioned only once, to find out more about the floating lights that appear on her birthday every year, but otherwise seems willing to accept the status quo even though she is dissatisfied with it. It seems incongruous to me that Rapunzel, so adept at keeping herself occupied, would be only mildly inclined to find out more about the floating lights. Supposedly they have captured her attention for as long as she can remember, yet in the establishing song there is no evidence of passionate interest in them. Her seeming lack of ambition to find out more about the lights is doubly disturbing since that desire is supposed to be what motivates her to leave the tower and start her quest in the first place.

This lack of ambition may be considered explained later in the movie. You do find out that in her innocence she has completely bought into the old woman’s story about the need to protect her from evil people who would harm her for her magical hair. However, not only does she admit this late in the movie, the intended purpose for her admission seems to be solely to deepen her relationship with the male lead, Flynn. The way it’s presented indicates that the filmmakers had no intention of using this fact to address an apparent weakness of character in the heroine. Instead they gave Rapunzel an animal companion, a chameleon with no apparent origin and whose sole purpose in the movie seems to be providing Rapunzel with external motivation to carry out an act of rebellion she might otherwise have been incapable of on her own. If so, then it was a poor storytelling choice: they created an extra character who added nothing later in the story, yet couldn’t be abandoned and became a waste of screen time.

Now, to be fair… if you just look at the lyrics for “Belle” typed up, you could say that it doesn’t look very passionate, either. But that, I think, is why the generic Disney teen pop song doesn’t work here. A standard length, standard format pop song simply doesn’t have the expressiveness necessary to good storytelling.

This lack is especially apparent when you compare the first song in the movie to the second. “Mother Knows Best” is sung by the old woman to Rapunzel. The old woman’s purpose in singing it is clearly to scare the girl into staying locked away in the tower where only she has access to the power of Rapunzel’s hair. The song starts off slowly and builds to a climax, during which the old woman stops singing temporarily to issue a veiled threat. This proves a chilling and effective way to show her manipulative and ruthless nature to the audience. The song serves both the character’s purpose AND that of the storyteller.

“When Will My Life Begin” then gets a reprise… but the reprise steps away from the pop genre and is more of a traditional number for a musical. It has some of the emotional expressiveness which was lacking the first time, though the pop singer voicing the character did not pull it off to my satisfaction. This raises the question of why they decided to cross genres for the reprise. Did they do it because the pop song was incapable of expressing the character’s emotions well and they knew it? If so, then why not just use the appropriate genre in the first place? Changing genres without an obvious reason draws attention away from the story and onto the storytelling.

The song that follows it creates avenues by which the filmmakers could have explored the range of powers inherent in Rapunzel’s hair. Rapunzel sweeps into a tavern full of lowlifes and convinces them to let her monetarily-valuable companion go free just because she needs him to help make her dream come true. But why do the men react so favorably to her pleas? Have they all been just waiting for an invitation to divulge the secrets lurking in their hearts? Does it work just because she’s pretty? Or is it some previously unknown power of her magical sun hair? If Rapunzel’s influence comes from the sunny power of her hair, which seems quite possible given how the horse reacts to her on their first meeting later, then it would have been nice to have the influential power of her hair concretized later in the movie with more silly songs. One could argue that the dancing in the streets of the capital city is further evidence, but you don’t necessarily have to have magical hair to get people to dance on a holiday in an era/setting where dancing is by nature a big group activity. The influence of her hair on these events is unclear and later songs neither help to explain nor debunk the possibility.

When “Mother Knows Best” gets its reprise, the old woman’s motivation for singing the song is basically the same as before. She’s trying to get Rapunzel to go back into hiding. However, the audience gets to see more of the old woman’s ruthlessness and a cutting cruelty that comes out in her choice of manipulative tactics and the tone of her voice. She sings “Rapunzel knows best” mockingly to guilt trip the girl and plant some doubt saplings so that it will be easier to get her away from Flynn later. It works, of course, when the old woman’s machinations come to fruition later on, so the audience gets to see the old woman’s darker nature gradually become more apparent.

The love song in the lantern release scene doesn’t seem to do much to develop the story at first, but clever use of alternation between Rapunzel and Flynn (a tactic also used to good effect in Beauty and the Beast and The Lion King) makes it work. Rapunzel starts the song, but her lyrics seem obvious and again suffer from lack of expressiveness on the singer’s part. When Flynn comes into the song, however, the audience learns that he’s just had an epiphany. His repetition and modifications of some of Rapunzel’s lyrics tie the song neatly into the story and his character development in particular. It’s a turning point, the moment when the thief comes to realize that the girl has become more important to him than the comfortable life he dreamed of as an orphan. Rapunzel’s lack of a powerful, expressive voice is less damaging in this song, too; it meshes very well with Flynn’s, which can be taken symbolically to imply chemistry between them.

I can only conclude that the songs don’t always serve the storytelling admirably, though there are exceptions. Even when a song does serve expositional purposes, the fact that the heroine’s voice actor can’t seem to get emotion across very well when singing usually damages the impact. Sometimes the songs raise questions about the story that go unanswered. The songs complement each other poorly. And on top of all that, they stand in contrast to a score which has none of these problems. The general lack of cohesion from song to song and between song and story weakens the movie as a whole.

Stand by for part two, which will not be over 3,000 words long.


Letter to my Representatives Regarding SOPA

December 18, 2011

In spite of being busy this morning, I took the time to write letters to all of my representatives in the House and the Senate to ask them not to support SOPA. While I’m a little ashamed to admit this, I’m having trouble figuring out which side of Congress has the bill in its hands, so I sent this letter to all three reps. Hopefully whichever rep or reps has to deal with Protect-IP will consider the same points as they apply to that bill.

Dear [Representative],

I am increasingly disturbed by the SOPA bill. In addition to the ease with which it allows censorship, I am given to understand that it would also destabilize the internet as a whole.

In my studies at college, it became clear to me that there is no solid definition of “globalization”. There are a couple of things about it that everyone agrees on, though. One is that it is important — that the countries of the world are rapidly knitting together in ways that were never possible before the development of current technology and that any country which doesn’t jump on the globalization bandwagon is endangering itself. Another is that the internet is the pin on which all this hinges.

The internet allows faster and easier exchanges of knowledge than ever before. Some of these uses are abuses, to be sure, but businesses — and especially small businesses — thrive on the conveniences the internet provides. Even if the infringement definitions in the SOPA bill didn’t make it possible to shut down innocent sites, threatening the stability of the internet threatens the operations of businesses of all sizes… but will most likely hamper small businesses far more than big ones.

I have heard that when experts tried to explain how the SOPA bill could lead to the destabilization of the internet that many of the representatives demonstrated a lack of willingness to listen or to learn and understand what they were being told. This disturbs me even more than the SOPA bill. Our representatives owe it to us to make EDUCATED decisions. If you do not understand, then swallow your pride and learn — or consult someone who DOES understand and take his or her advice seriously. If you doubt that person’s opinion, then get a second, and a third, and a fourth until you’re sure you’re getting the information you need. I was appalled that our senators would even CONSIDER passing a bill without even trying to understand the consequences of it. I have never, ever, been more disappointed in our government.

Please do not back the SOPA bill. Even if you don’t believe (or aren’t sure) that it is a vehicle of censorship, you owe it to us, your Alaskan constituents, as well as the rest of the United States of America not to be hasty in making this decision.

More Sincerely Than Any Other Letter I Have Written in a Long, Long Time,
[My Name]


New PlayStation Network TOS

September 18, 2011

I got an e-mail from Sony today. They’re changing how the PlayStation Network (PSN) is managed, and with it they’re changing the Terms of Service. The e-mail included a link to a PDF of the new TOS for my perusal. They were nice enough to make all the changes obvious, with all changes in red lettering — old terms crossed out, new terms right next to them. The bulk of the changes just refer to the change in management.

However, there are two big changes they’ve made.

  1. By agreeing to the TOS, users waiver their rights to class-action lawsuits related to PSN.
  2. PSN content is no longer being purchased by the user. Instead, we are licensing the use of the software.

So basically… since they can’t legally tell us what we can and can’t do with our own property (i.e. hacking the operating system), they’re removing out right to actually own any of it. Since players have become reliant on the connectivity of PSN, they have quite the crowbar to leverage against us… agree to our terms, they say, or be unable to fully use the content you’ve already paid for. And the new TOS stipulates that any violation of the TOS requires users to delete/destroy any copies of the content in their possession.

One question that arises here is this: what about the stuff we’ve already paid for, which we technically own under the old terms of service? I don’t know about any of you, but I paid for the content with the understanding that it was mine forever and ever to have and to hold until catastrophe do us part. By agreeing to the new terms of service, are we giving back the rights we paid for on software purchased under the old agreement?

Honestly, most users won’t be directly affected by the changes. If they’re using the system the way Sony wants them to, then these legal conundrums won’t be an issue for them.

However, this says a lot about trends in copyright law and digital rights management. Society is drifting towards cloudsourcing and downloading everything digitally. Do we really want to allow the big companies to pigeonhole us like this?

A copy of the TOS I received can be downloaded here (PDF).


What I’ve Been Up To

July 23, 2011

The following is copy-pasted from a post I just made on the NerdFitness forums. It pretty much sums up how things have been for me for the past couple of months.

I dunno how many of you went, “Hmm… WTF happened to Crowbeak?” after I dropped off the radar, but I just wanted to let yall know that I live. During the Rebel Strength Guide contest, I got sick back-to-back with 3-4 different things, so I was down for two weeks straight, then I was finishing up college (successfully graduated!), then working on getting ready to go back to Japan when my dad died.

A lot has happened since then and I probably only remember about half of it. The first two days were awful — within four hours of my finding out about dad’s death, my cell phone battery had burned out and I had to go get a new one. My Mom and brother didn’t get into town for two days, so I was bombarded with decisions that had to be made that they couldn’t really help me with. Everything went pretty well and I got to kick back for the two weeks they were here because I’d be having to take care of what was left after they were gone.

A friend of dad’s had called my alma mater — HAHA I CAN SAY THAT NAO! :D — trying to find me, so I knew when I got a call from the Dean of Students saying that K.S. was trying to reach me about something urgent that dad must’ve been critically injured or killed. I knew he was on a 16-hour motorcycle trip the day before and assumed that he’d been killed in a crash, but it turned out that he rode almost 800 miles (wearing a helmet for once, since he was riding through Canada down towards Juneau) and dropped dead in a parking lot. The nice thing about this is that it was so very in character. The bad thing was that he died in Canada, which complicated the process of getting his death certificate processed.

Anyway, the “funeral” service was fantastic. We didn’t know what exactly Dad wanted to happen when he died, but he’d talked idly about it a couple of times with random people, so we were able to piece together a bit. He wanted a celebration of life rather than open casket boohoos, so we preceded the funeral with a motorcycle escort/funeral procession from the funeral home to the crematorium. :D Let me just say… hundreds of motorcycles. In the grand tradition of Pics or it Didn’t Happen, I offer a video someone took at the start of the procession: http://vimeo.com/25532020. Two and a half minutes of motorcycles getting in line.

One thing he wanted was to have his body shot out of a cannon, but that’s illegal in Alaska because it’s considered desecration of the remains. We’re currently trying to arrange to have his ashes put in a cannonball and shot out of a cannon, with finding a cannon being the main hurdle. We haven’t had time to worry about it, what with trying to sort out his very messy affairs.

That, of course, has been complicated by the fact that I’m about to leave for Japan. My not-actually-but-practically sister has agreed to be executor of the estate, since she has no plans to leave the state, I’m leaving for Japan in less than a week, and my brother’s job in the Navy is as a Seabee, so he gets posted overseas on every deployment. A number of factors have prevented us from filing probate paperwork yet, but my part is done.

On a happier note!

I got my placement information for my job in Japan the day before Dad died. :D I’m going to be in Nakagawa-cho, a farming village in the extreme northern part of Japan — almost as far north as you can get and still be in Japan. The town is on one side of a river in a valley, with the farms on the other side. They farm vegetables, for the most part. I’ve been in contact with the person from whom I am taking over, and every time I talk to her I get more excited! The town is tiny, with one each of elementary, middle, and high schools, and I’ll be teaching at all of them.

The apartment I’ll be living in (at 12,000 yen or $150 a month) is within 15 minutes walk to all the places I’ll be working, including the main office of the Board of Education. They’ve been using the same apartment for the local ALT (my job) for twenty years now, so in addition to the appliances the BoE supplies (vacuum, washer, fridge, TV, bed), there’s all the things other ALTs have left behind. Susan, my predecessor, says that she’s thrown away most of the junk they’ve left behind over the course of her four years there. (In Japan, you pay high fees to have large garbage disposed of.) It’s stocked with all kinds of things, though, including cooking utensils and miscellaneous small appliances. Since skiing and snowboarding are big there, Susan’s leaving me her snowboard, too. :D

My plane leaves Anchorage at 7 AM on Saturday, the 30th. One layover — in Portland, I think — and then on to Tokyo for three days orientation with 800 other JETs before heading north.:(


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